问题描述:
A English poem writen by myself .
reasons for quit
quit for u don't care me
quit for ur eyes not on me
quit for I don't wanna be hurt
quit for stopping missing u
quit for I have sth important to do
quit for I wanna live a bright life
quit for I'd like to dip the previous love deep in my broken heart
quit for my heart had beaten with urs
quit for I had given all I had to you
quit for what I had done my best for you doesn't change ur mind
quit for I don't wanna live in the memory or ideal imagine
If u see this ,u'll know
This is a poem ,I wanna show it to my love to let her know what I am feeling .
dear friends ,can you correct some of my words or mistakes to make this poem more
heart-stirring.
If u do I'll give you a high grades
reasons for quit
quit for u don't care me
quit for ur eyes not on me
quit for I don't wanna be hurt
quit for stopping missing u
quit for I have sth important to do
quit for I wanna live a bright life
quit for I'd like to dip the previous love deep in my broken heart
quit for my heart had beaten with urs
quit for I had given all I had to you
quit for what I had done my best for you doesn't change ur mind
quit for I don't wanna live in the memory or ideal imagine
If u see this ,u'll know
This is a poem ,I wanna show it to my love to let her know what I am feeling .
dear friends ,can you correct some of my words or mistakes to make this poem more
heart-stirring.
If u do I'll give you a high grades
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