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I have read your post and I am quite interested in it. I found it so inspiring that the opinions about the bed in the future shared by you guys. Ok, let me talk about some of my ideas about it.
Firstly, of the most important critiria of a bed, it should be consice and appealing, in the perspective of the aesthetics, the strucure should be flexible as well as the guarantee of the steadness. Furthermore, some innovative technology can be taken into the account, such as the ambient temperature control, and the moisture control, which can maintain the temperature and the moisture at a pleasant level, any time of a year. Besides, some humanity design may also be featured, including the music player system and the fragrance emitter, where dulcet melody and redolent smell would enhance the quality of sleeping.
Above is my consideration about the bed in the future, which I found fanciful. However, as the technology develops, it will be surely realised and popularized.
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