问题描述：
请改一句话：
My experience in this line of work includes three years as a salesman in a small local company.
我想可改成：
I have some relevant working experiences in this line of work,which includes my working as a salesman for a small local company for three years.
但是不确定,请大侠们帮忙
My experience in this line of work includes three years as a salesman in a small local company.
我想可改成：
I have some relevant working experiences in this line of work,which includes my working as a salesman for a small local company for three years.
但是不确定,请大侠们帮忙
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