谁可以用英语 My best holiday 为题写80字左右的短文（时间.地点.感受等）.

My holiday was good.
I stayed at home for sometime.I went to Tianyi Square and bought same games.But one day,my monther,my younger brother and I went to Tianyi digital square to buy games.And I bought a new uniform in the evening.I'd like to have a glass of apple juice my monther bought it for me.I says," Thanks a lot." I bought some shoes.I want a pair of sports shoes.In the shop,the wonderful song added tour pleasure.I see the black shoes.my monther says," There are beautiful !"
I was happy that day,because I went to Tianyi Square and had a lot of fum.
我的假期是好的.
我以前总是呆在家里.我想去到天一广场买相同的游戏.但是有一天,我的母亲,我的弟弟和我一起走到天一数码广场买游戏.我买了一个新的一样的游戏在晚上.我想要一杯苹果汁,我妈妈就买给我,我说,“我买了一些鞋子,因为我想要一双运动鞋.在商店里的美妙的歌声,增加了旅游的乐趣.我看到了黑色的鞋子我妈妈说:“真漂亮!”
我很开心,因为我去到天一广场,有很多乐趣.
（宁波天一广场,地点可以自己改）我在网上下的英文,自己翻译的.