帮我修改英语两个小故事

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帮我修改英语两个小故事
Once upon a time there was a farmer who worked hard in the fields every day.One day,while he was ploughing the fields,he heard a bumping sound.He saw a dead rabbit .He thought to himself ,"Since it is so easy to get a rabbit like that,why should I work so hard all day long"He threw his hoe away and lay by the tree every day,dreaming for more rabbits to come.When he finally realized his foolish
,he starved to death.The story told us no pain ,no gain ,no one can reap where one has not sown.
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守株待兔啊,有一些语法错误,改过后的:
Once upon a time,there was a very hard-working farmer.One day,while he was ploughing the fields,he heard a really loud bumping sound.He saw a rabbit hit its head on the tree stump and lie on the ground dead.He then told himself," Since it is so easy to get a rabbit like that,why should i work so hard all day long?" He threw away his hoe and lay beside the tree stump wating for more rabbits to come every day,but the rabbits never came.When he finally realized his foolishness,he was already starved to death.The story told us no pain,no gain,no one can reap before sown.
 
 
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