问题描述:
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i get up early in the morning
lost something that seens
opening the windows to feel living
velvety sunlight cover the earth with the wind
enchanting,warming,and loving
you are the light that eternalizing
evening i go outside
looking at the charming sky
feeling wonderful sunlight
keeping your face in my mind
touching golden sun with smile
listening to bird song quiet
i get up early in the morning
lost something that seens
opening the windows to feel living
velvety sunlight cover the earth with the wind
enchanting,warming,and loving
you are the light that eternalizing
evening i go outside
looking at the charming sky
feeling wonderful sunlight
keeping your face in my mind
touching golden sun with smile
listening to bird song quiet
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