问题描述：
请看我这篇英语作文,然后给些指点,
大一的,在练作文,用某年四级题写的:
要求:
一次性塑料袋的使用；使用带来的问题；限制使用的意义
文章:
These days,disposable plastic bags have enjoyed tremendous popularity among people when they choose what to carry things.
With more and more usage,however,disposable plastic bags bring us a lot of trouble as well.For the reason that they are too special to be decomposed,the bags surely result in many environmental problems on soil and water.At the same time,due to the bags’ very low price it has always been extremely difficult managing the use of them.And many similar problems like this.
So in some sense,limiting the use of disposable plastic bags seem quite significant to us.After the reduction,one obvious effect is on improvements of our living environment,and another on the city’s cleaning level’s rise.More importantly,it will be a mark of civilization.
希望大家给予正确的指点..
limiting ..seems 我打错了,少打S
大家注意提醒我 中式英语的使用,大词小用,句式是否过于不地道,是否需要丰富化这些.
大一的,在练作文,用某年四级题写的:
要求:
一次性塑料袋的使用；使用带来的问题；限制使用的意义
文章:
These days,disposable plastic bags have enjoyed tremendous popularity among people when they choose what to carry things.
With more and more usage,however,disposable plastic bags bring us a lot of trouble as well.For the reason that they are too special to be decomposed,the bags surely result in many environmental problems on soil and water.At the same time,due to the bags’ very low price it has always been extremely difficult managing the use of them.And many similar problems like this.
So in some sense,limiting the use of disposable plastic bags seem quite significant to us.After the reduction,one obvious effect is on improvements of our living environment,and another on the city’s cleaning level’s rise.More importantly,it will be a mark of civilization.
希望大家给予正确的指点..
limiting ..seems 我打错了,少打S
大家注意提醒我 中式英语的使用,大词小用,句式是否过于不地道,是否需要丰富化这些.
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