帮我写篇英语小作文.今天是4月21日,星期六.天气晴朗你喝TOm去动物园.哪里的动物非常有趣,当你看见有为小朋友向猴子喂

Sunday,April 21
It's a sunny day.Tom and me went to the zoo.There are many animals in the zoo.Such as,tagers,monkeys,pandas,all kinds of birds and so on.The animals are intersting .We all like them.When I saw someone feeding the monkeys,I provented him from doing that.As I know,monkeys have there nature .We should not broke it.Besides,there are many people who have duty to look after the animals .If everyone feed the animals ,maybe it would be die.
The people learnd it and he left there.The people there are pound of me.They prised me,
What an interesting and valuable day it is!