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解题过程：
同学，文章写的不错，但有些小细节需要注意，老师这篇文章能给你打9分，继续努力，加油哦！
老师批改后的作文如下：
The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China .On the evening before the Spring Festival ,families get together and have a big meal .In many places people like to set off firecrackers .Dumplings are the most traditional food .Children like the festival very much ,because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes .They can also get some money from their parents. This money is given to children for good luck . People put New Year pictures on the wall for good luck .
