寻找英语病句这是我自己写的英语片段,请指点错误的地方.谢谢! At 12:00 o’clock.The Field fa

寻找英语病句
这是我自己写的英语片段,请指点错误的地方.谢谢!
At 12:00 o’clock.The Field family going toshopping.They buy some food and fruit for birthday party. Mrs.Hunter:Hello! Stacey Field:Hello!Mrs.Hunter. Mrs.Hunter:Where is yougoing to? Stacey Field:Oh!I’ll go to shopping. Mrs.Hunter:Well!Do you want some bananas? Stacey Field:Yes!What do you have suggestion? Mrs.Hunter:They sell all their bananas at very good prices. Stacey Field:Thank you!Bye! Mrs.Hunter: Bye! At 13:00 o’clock she buy lots and lots of fruit and food,they're readyto return home.
Stacey Field:Mom!Can you help me? Stacey Field:Mom?Are you at home? Mrs.Field:What's up? Stacey Field:I’m busy.Can you help me totake care of Thtise? Mrs.Field:Sure! At 14:15 o’clock Thtise’s partner gettingto Field’s home.and Scott Field getting to home,too.