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六级作文,求修改～
本人征战六级多次,但都以失败而告终.但每次都以几分的差距而落败,这次又走上了备考的路线,写六级作文一篇,希望高手能帮忙看看有什么错误,
With the develop of information technology,more and more e-books have appeared.Taking a look around,we can find examples too numerous to list:“Thank you”“Star”are very famous internet novels.
Some people believe that e-books will take place the tradional ones.They maintain that e-books are very convenience.Everyone can download it from net.They also argue that e-books are cheaper.In other word,each one can afford it,and it will never cost your much money.
But others may not agree.They hold the view that real books will never been take place.They think that tradional ones have a special smell.When you read traditional ones ,you will enjoy the smell.In additional,some one in favour of putting mamy books on their bookshelf.They belive it is a symbol of their professional.
In my view,I agree with the latter opinion.I bleieve the new one will never take place the traditional one,and I enjoy the special smell of it
本人征战六级多次,但都以失败而告终.但每次都以几分的差距而落败,这次又走上了备考的路线,写六级作文一篇,希望高手能帮忙看看有什么错误,
With the develop of information technology,more and more e-books have appeared.Taking a look around,we can find examples too numerous to list:“Thank you”“Star”are very famous internet novels.
Some people believe that e-books will take place the tradional ones.They maintain that e-books are very convenience.Everyone can download it from net.They also argue that e-books are cheaper.In other word,each one can afford it,and it will never cost your much money.
But others may not agree.They hold the view that real books will never been take place.They think that tradional ones have a special smell.When you read traditional ones ,you will enjoy the smell.In additional,some one in favour of putting mamy books on their bookshelf.They belive it is a symbol of their professional.
In my view,I agree with the latter opinion.I bleieve the new one will never take place the traditional one,and I enjoy the special smell of it
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