请高手帮校对如下的广告文案翻译:多谢!We make your bright idea the next big thi

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请高手帮校对如下的广告文案翻译:多谢!We make your bright idea the next big thing.
We make your bright idea the next big thing.
Having a bright idea is one thing. Makingit real is another. It takes a moment of inspiration to change everything. That's the spark of innovation. IBM is revolutionizing the storage, networking and consumer
electronics markets by creating the products and technologies that bring
people and information together more than ever before. IBM. We're the spark thatn makes your ideas real.
激发您的灵感 实现新的成功
仅有灵感是不够的,将灵感变为现实更为重要.创新的火花可点燃稍纵即逝的灵感,并改变万物.IBM通过创新的产品和技术影响着比以前任何时候都多的人们和信息,并引领着存储、网络和消费电子市场的变革.IBM ---我们就是那将您的灵感变为现实的火花.
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如果用它来做广告,我建议全都改掉.太中式了.
题目inspire your idea,commit new success不错,或help you find your inspiration,and new suucess!
Only inspiration is not enough,it's more important to make it into reality.
回来看看,写完吧,供参考.----继续:
The spark of innovation can bring flown inspiration and thus change everything.
IBM is influcing more and more people and information than ever before through innovative product and techniques,and leading the innovation of electronic memory,network and consumer market.
IBM,we are exactly the spark to change your inspiration to reality.
 
 
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