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[英语短文] 求揪出语病.（一般现在时）
Shenzhen City
Shenzhen is a beautiful city.There are many large parks in Shenzhen .
Many people like taking walk in these parks.There are also many trees and flowers in Shenzhen.
The greenery is a decoration for the city.
If you like going shopping,you can come to Wanpan shop.There are also many wood furniture in large supermarket.
For some men,Shenzhen is a large warm homestead.
Shenzhen City
Shenzhen is a beautiful city.There are many large parks in Shenzhen .
Many people like taking walk in these parks.There are also many trees and flowers in Shenzhen.
The greenery is a decoration for the city.
If you like going shopping,you can come to Wanpan shop.There are also many wood furniture in large supermarket.
For some men,Shenzhen is a large warm homestead.
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